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Re: Killing for Love
Stabbing! Blood! Yes! How romantic! ;D I liked this a lot. [8 But a 600-word limit for a short story seems a bit cruel, don't you think? Anyway... "Not anymore!" ...
Sep 24, 2010 -
Re: untitled part 1 (edited)
A woman, no older that sixteen , runs down a hallway in some far off castle. Her sky blue dress whips around her ankles. Her matching [It sounded a bit ...
Aug 20, 2010 -
Re: Fire Girl Chapter 1
I'm quite jealous. I wasn't that creative at thirteen. XD You did a good job with introducing the characters, which I like to see. It's hard to get involved in ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Delphinus 42639 (a collection of stories as yet unnamed)
All right, I have to mention your dialog right away. Your characters communicate smoothly, and you seem to know how to add pinches of humor here and there without overdoing ...
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: Hated - Part one
Yeah, Evi pretty much covered the important points. Your piece was very lovely, though I do agree at some points you put a little too much. If the entire novel ...
Oct 24, 2009